A.O. Avalon

Perra, I'm an American so I meant it in jest, and I was referring more to the bastardization of English into American over the past two hundred years. I happen ...

mmm yes i am bad about dismissing my incidentals...i think i'm going to edit the number of characters right there... Nancy and Patrick are both pretty unecessary.

very true, Americans are a lot of b******* :P. poms = brits? *Don't use cuss words in this forum. Griffinkeeper*

Hello, El, and no you don't count as English, Just as an English (as opposed to American) speaker. The humor/humour is that because of signifigant differences in slang and spelling, ...

that's just it though, the characters you've met so far arent' supports, they're incidentals. they'll be lucky to get another scene. and they're meant to be a touch transparent. the ...

Days and nights and eons ago the sun ran away from the moon. he went to parts unknown--the universe he said, was his oyster. mama moon didn't know what he ...

i don't read this as poem, i read it as lyrics. i can actually hear it playing in my head with a slow-ish tempo and lots of bass and a ...

Placing his hand in mine, “Terry. And it was the only flavor they had.” He winked This is a little disjointed... i think maybe "and with a wink he strolled ...

yeah i don't speak french yet. but i have to study a language, my college has it as a graduation requirement. since i think i'm going to specialize in French ...

Ravin won't meet the girl if he doesn't lose, right? (just a feeling...) That's right! this is constructive critism because you know we love it, we just want to see ...

A Brits/Candians/Aussies/Kiwis (do we have anyone from NZ?) vs. Americans spelling-bee!!!! *hopes everyone else sees the humor*

The cave as dank and smelt of rotting flesh, but it would have to do. Anywhere but the open as the sun ascends to it’s lofty perch in the sky, ...

er, that should be "AmericaN" however, i think i've proved over and over again that proof reading isn't exactly my forte. Fire, have you tried sending this to any publishers? ...

*sad* did you have to kill off all of Ravin's men? Corda is creepy!! i like it :D is neka the same guy ravin's fighting at the end? btw, teh ...

well not being able to find the paper is a legit reason... but don't let me catch you getting down on yourself like that again bubble!!! --Alyce--